Prime Bloodlines (Bloodlines, #1) – Freepe.co

Keira Jameson Used To Lead A Normal Life, She Just Had A Gift, Passed Down Through The Generations Of Her Family Now, After Hearing Voices, Having Strange Dreams Of Others Calling Out To Her, And Her Grandfather S Last Words Haunting Her, She Sets Out To Find Other Families Like Hers Along With Her Best Friend Lily, The Only Person Outside Her Family To Know About Her Gift, Keira Begins A Hunt For Her Ancestors A Chance Meeting With A Young Man, Lucian Turner, Sets Them On The Right Track, But Their Discoveries Change The Way Keira Will See Herself For Ever Fear, Superstition And Heritage Are Shaping Keira S Future And She Must Face Her Enemies, Even If This Could Mean Losing Her Life She Cannot Escape Her DestinyPart Buffy Style Horror, Part Tender Romance, Bloodlines Will Have Fans Of The Genre On Tenterhooks Waiting For The Next Instalment Of This Gripping And Hell Raising Tale I ve been meaning to add this review for a long time, but since I ve just had my first child, I ve not had the chance to do so until now This book actually gets 4.5 stars from me My gripe is the editing However, I ve read several times there was a ruckus about this and the Author is having the book redone with another publisher GOOD idea, because the storyline is fantastic It s fresh, new, definitely different As a new author, and still learning, your previous editor should have helped you a lot , I do believe this has been said on another review I am a writer myself, and when I started out I received a lot of help from my editor, she was fantastic and very supportive This is only meant as support, not nastily, if the editor had done their job properly, I wouldn t have been able to fault this story So best of luck with the new publisher The story definitely shows promise The characters all have their own personalities, which for me is great, and none of them are boring There isthan one POV which I love, and also the author doesn t just concentrate on building backgrounds up for her two or three main characters, all of them are equally important and play a vital role in the story I don t spoil books for others by revealing the plot line too much, so this is what I will say Bloodlines was a quick, and very entertaining read The characters well you will either love them or hate them Some of the men in the book I wish were real, lol, very yummy Keira, the main character left me a little indifferent Sometimes I love her, her wit, sarcasm and general attitude were brilliant, but other times I wanted to strangle her I don t dislike her, and I understand why, in the story, she is how she is at the moment, but in the end, especially in a chapter called Healer and the last few chapters of the book, she is nothing short of AMAZING SHE is the sort of person you would want as your friend and ally She totally kicks arse and I can t wait to see how she goes on I have no idea what direction this story is going to go in, but I cannot wait for the next in the series, I will definitely be purchasing it I will also be buying the new edit UPDATE the new version of Bloodlines is now available from .com Kindle version also avaiable now This is actually my own book, so its not fair to give it a rating. This book had such great reviews I purposefully sought it out when major book sellers, such as BN, didn t carry it I should have taken that for a sign.My biggest gripes about this book are 1 a real editor needs to proof this book a lot and 2 the author needs to do a much better job on researching her facts.For my first issue I will say the flow, writing, building of the story, etc is horrid Thoughts are not presented clearly or reasonably as she jumps all around in her conversation topics between the characters with no indication or background for transition there is so muchwrong with the grammar and flow that if I put it all into words I would have a book for editing this book Any decent editor would have caught all this and had the author rewrite until it was 90% better Had this happened it could have been a really great as it is, it reads as rough very rough draft My second issue has to do with the very apparent fact that the author is English, as is the main character and her close friend, so it makes sense that these two characters to speak the Queen s English BUT NOT THE REST OF THE CHARACTERS in the book The local characters are supposed to have been born and raised in Massachusetts and yet their grammar and mannerisms are also very British English Americans do not refer to trash bags or garbage bags as bin bags pg 137 , we don t say rubbish pg.127 , Piss Off pg 141 , Americans don t go around kissing each other s cheeksthe list of errors is endless I kept wondering where the book was taking place because I knew she wrote that they were in Salem, Massachusetts and yet everyone speaks and act as though they are from Great Britain I forced myself to endure hoping the book would get better but I finally gave up when I reached chapter 16 it s just too awful to continue My best suggestion would be for the author to republish the book after a lot of editing.In the end I realized all the great reviews must have come from family and friends Not a true representation of the quality of the book The author definitely has potential so keep writing, keep learning and find a good editor. This is my Daughters first book in a trilogy.I have read it 5 times and each time is as good as the first Some people may think this is a biest review But if it was rubbish, believe me, i wouldnt have encouraged her to have it published Please give it a try, you will be hooked.